Sammy, Cindy, Tom, Rock, Blade, an Jack

[ashtail]

Name:Sammy

Age(in moons): 15

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) shecat

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) red pelt with glowing blaack eyes

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Cindy

Age(in moons): 17

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) shecat

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) sandish brown with bright green eyes and is about to kit

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Tom

Age(in moons): 14

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) tom

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) Brown tabby with dark brown eyes, is second in comand in the rouge group

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name: Rock

Age(in moons): 19

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) tom

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) dark gray pelt and speckles that makes him blends in with rocks with blue eyes and is Cindy's mate

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Blade

Age(in moons): 16

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) shecat

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) leader of the rouge group and is black with red streaks through her hur that makes her look like giant gashes in her fur with mystifying dark eyes (no one can ever tell what color they all)

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Jack

Age(in moons):13

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) tom

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) black with glowing green eyes

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) sorta like a medicine cat for the rouge groups

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)


there are or can be more in this group

[Thunderstar]

Those look like thier putting a toe across the line of realism. For instance:
Sammy has black eyes. And cats don't have black eyes. They can have blue, green, gold, brown, yellow, copper, and different tints of all of the above. But not black. Sorry. :/

Aside from Sammy, the others look okay...except:
Blade:
She is described to have a black pelt with red streaks that look like 'gashes'.
I'm not certain this is a realistic pelt color, but I may let it pass anyway, just so long as you know that when saying a cat has a red pelt, it's really a sort of orange. Marmalade, and ginger is also what this "red" color is called. Sammy is also said to have a red pelt, but since Blade's 'red' looks like gashes in her black pelt, I just thought it was worth saying that the streaks can't actually be an actual red.

...As for the "mystifying dark eyes" that no one can really tell the color of, that's kind of weird. 0_o It's interesting, spooky, and makes her a little cool, but it's also unrealistic. I'd feel better if you changed it. I don't mind mystifying or even the dark part, but put a color in, okay?

[Shardstar]

Another thing (just thought I'd mention this), rogues don't really believe in StarClan. So they don't really have medicine cats.

[ashtail]

um...............*SNIFF**GULP* uh, okay....im sorry.......this is the second time ive done somthing wrong on here....................*SIGH*i guess thats how it goes.......you can change those errors if you want........im to sad to right now...........................

[Thunderstar]

0_o
We don't hate you, you know. Your application just needs tweaking. And I don't think I should modify it, since only you know what would work best for them (aside from the issues discussed).

What are you sad for? Bad day?

[ashtail]

oh, it was nothing really. well, okay, ill make the changes now.

Name:Sammy

Age(in moons): 15

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) shecat

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) red pelt with dark green eyes

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Cindy

Age(in moons): 17

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) shecat

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) sandish brown with bright green eyes and is about to kit

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Tom

Age(in moons): 14

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) tom

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) Brown tabby with dark brown eyes, is second in comand in the rouge group

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name: Rock

Age(in moons): 19

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) tom

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) dark gray pelt and speckles that makes him blends in with rocks with blue eyes and is Cindy's mate

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Blade

Age(in moons): 16

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) shecat

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) leader of the rouge group and is black with mystifying dark hazel eyes

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) rouge

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

Name:Jack

Age(in moons):13

Gender: (Tom or she-cat) tom

Description: (eye color, pelt color, etc) black with bright green eyes

Rank: (kit, warrior, leader, elder, rouge or kittypet) sorta like a medicine cat for the rouge groups

Clan: (Forestclan, Hillclan, Meadowclan, or Boulderclan)

[ashtail]

oh, and jack is not a medicine cat

[ashtail]

so, are they excepted?

[Shardstar]

Don't worry, Thunderstar will get around to it
>^__^<

[ashtail]

yeah, i didnt mean to sound impatiance. heyya!

[Shardstar]

Dood, sup?

[ashtail]

notin much! yoyoyo!

[Shardstar]

Dooooooood

[Thunderstar]

Oh, yes! They are accepted. XD

[ashtail]

yeah!!! *claps*